雅思写作三步曲

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　　2 .The world needs more love.

　　微观：1.as far as the young people are concerned, they could develop the sense of responsibility, independence as well as interpersonal skills in the process of helping others in the neighborhood. In this way, people may live in harmony in the community.

　　2. Get social experience

　　关于做义工缺点：

　　微观：1. the downsides of volunteer community service are worth mentioning. In fact, in the city like Shanghai, an increasing number of graduates find it harder to make a living on their own. Thus, if all of the young adults are required to do full-time unpaid job in a fixed period, some of them would have no income source, which is unrealistic to these youngsters.

　　2. In addition, it is believed that community service could possibly take up their time of acquiring knowledge.

　　二、客观利弊法

　　如电子书籍是否能取代传统书籍，就可从电子书籍客观利弊来分析是否可取代

　　考题：TV, internet and radio are very popular nowadays. Some people say that they will replace books and written words as the main source of information. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

　　Argue for A

　　优势：1. the fastest and most effective way of obtaining information

　　2.we can get information on TV and in the Internet instead of buying newspapers and going to libraries, which saves time and money.

　　3. informative/ have super capacities to save information. On the contrary, the capacities of books are limited

　　ARGUE against A

　　劣势：1. people can not use the electronic media without equipment such as computers and TV sets; however, books are portable.

　　2. books and written words having more than 3000 years history are more mature than electronic media

　　3. no good for protecting the copyrights.

　　4. People often criticize TV for showing too much sex and violence

　　三、假设举例法

　　如讨论是否可用动物做实验，很多同学无话可说，我们假设真的不用动物做实验了会有什么后果，考题：

　　some people claim that people should not use live animals to test medicine or toiletry. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

　　IF WE DID NOT USE ANIMALS TO TEST MEDICINE OR TOIETRY,

　　1.it is a great limitation on medicine development

　　2.new products without animal test may be dangerous and harmful

　　3. if we do not use live animals to test medicine or toiletry, the test objects must be live humans.

　　四、对象要素法

　　我们可从话题所涉及的各个对象出发，如空运水果蔬菜是否合理，那么空运水果蔬菜所涉及的对象就多了，包括出口国，进口国，消费者，航空公司和政府。

　　考题：air transport is increasingly used to export fruits and vegetables to some coutries where can not be grown or out of season. Some people think it is not justified. What is your opinion?

　　1. for consumers, they can taste some foreign foods without going to other countries.

　　2. for transporters, such operation can bring much income. Actually, only about 40% seats of plane are in service in off-seasons compared to offering discounted plane tickets, transporting foods may be a better choice.

　　3. for exporters, such orders are gold of their business. With the development of technology, the yield is increasing, but if those foods can not be sold immediately, they may decay/rot/ go bad/ moldy. The air transportation just solves this problem and brings money for them.

　　4. for governments, they cannot be happier than receiving tax by economy development.

　　最后谈谈如何美化句子，老师还应给学生梳理英语句子类型（简单句，并列句，复杂句，并列复杂句），此外还应建议一些高分句式，这些高分句式主要可摘于考官范文，同时学生还应大量阅读范文学习里面经典句型。

　　一、简单句

　　1. 对这个问题人们持有不同观点

　　People hold different opinions /views on this issue.

　　二、并列句

　　1. 学生行为不良似乎成了一个越来越广泛的问题，我认为现代的生活方式要对此负责任。

　　Poor student behavior seems to be an increasingly widespread problem and I think modern lifestyles are responsible for this.

　　三、复杂句

　　名词性从句， 定语从句， 状语从句。其中名词性从句包括主语从句，表语从句，宾语从句，同位语从句。

　　1. 这并不意味着没有这些条件的人就不能幸福。

　　This does not mean that people without these conditions cannot be happy.

　　2.尽管有人把幸福和财富跟物质成功联系起来，但另一些人认为幸福存在于感情和亲密的人际关系中。

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