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　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the Topic: Lectures or Discussions. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese.

　　1、一些学生赞成讲座式教学；

　　2、另一些学生偏爱讨论式教学；

　　3、你的看法。

　　浮在T海的鱼：

　　Many university students are complaining about the lectures are boring and lack of originality.They can hardly concentrate themselves on the content,and were often carried away during the lecture.They said they didn't like the way of teaching.

　　However,another kind of teaching method called discussion,which is welcomed by more and more university students.They said that they tend to be more initiatively and actively during the discussion.Moreover,students are motivated by various topic of discussion,and they are likely to be inspired and open-minded.

　　Every coin has two sides,on the one hand,lecture won't be replaced by discussion because it's dominant statue in the teaching filed, and it as one of the traditional teaching method,which can't be elimnated by these newly-established teaching methods.On the other hand,lecturers should try harder to add some more interesting and originality part into thier lecture catering to students' taste.

　　点评：结构清楚，单复数和时态有混乱，简单词的拼写错误，大概8左右。

　　tudou919

　　There is no consuesus of opinions among students as to the view of the way to teach.Some students approve to the way of lecture.Reasons are listed as following:To begin with,teachers have plenty of time to teach,so students get more knowledge.Moreover,only this way,students' mind focus on the lesson.

　　Others students,on the contray,prefer to the way of disscussion.There are two reasons.For one thing,it is much time to students talking about what they learn.For another,teachers and students have a good communication.

　　I personally believe that we can combin with the two ways.We listen carefully to the teachers presentation,and then disscuss what we just learned.According this way,we will get more useful knowledge.

　　点评：结构运用很好，有部分变化。但有较多语法错误，如倒装和非谓语结构等，字数不够。大概8左右。

　　kiara_1103

　　Nowadays various kinds of the teaching ways has been taken in the universities.the most important patterns,Lecture and Discussion ,also cause a hit arguement among the sudents.some of them hold the point to suppor the lectures,for which they have the chance to inquire konwledge more specific from the professioners.otherwise,lectures seems to specified a atmosphere of study to keep students from wandering in mind.

　　however,another amount of sudents opposit this viewpoint agree that the Dicussions is a better chioce.for Dicussions,as a untraditional way taken from foreign,engage students to anticipate in the study initiatively.in fact ,establishment of the relax study obains the success ,not only in study ,but the communication.

　　for my viewpoint,the two ways also make huge meaning in the achievement of study with the appropriate arrangemnet. lt is our duty that to try both of the ways and find out the right for ourselves.

　　点评：结构清楚，有信号词。但大小写混乱和标点混乱，主谓一致和较多拼写错误，及其他语法错误。大概6～7左右。

　　tuzi_123

　　The lecture teaching style what is traditional teaching style is conformed by some students who think it is easy to accept for studying.

　　But, Another students prefer to discussions teaching style, The reason can be analized as follows.

　　Firstly, The discussions style could let all students become more activity in class. Secondly, The disscussion would enthusiasm students interesting on on course, At last, students can remenber the knowledge what study by discussion for a longer time than lecture teaching style.

　　In my opinion, I prefer discussions to lecture, to begin with, we will have the ability to question and solution a problem. On the other hand, more knowledge we will acquire through discussion on a question than lecture on the same problem

　　点评：结构尚可，有很多严重拼写及语法错误，如，主谓一致、词性等等。标点、大小写错误，有些句子难以理解。大概5～6左右。

　　gracehan16

　　Some students approval of the lectures education as the reason is the teacher can teach us what is correct and what is wrong .When the teacher is giving lecture,the students can learn something that they should learn.Students achiveved high scores only through remember what the eacher said in the lecture.

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